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Monday, November 10, 2008

Cold and Wet

Sitting at the window looking out at that cold weather.
Little rain drops hitting the ground really fast.

It feels really cold out there.
People running everywhere.

Little kids in cosy jackets waiting under shelter.
Puddles everywhere kids jumping up and down in
huge puddles.

By Robin
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7 comments:

  1. Maria KarlaNovember 17, 2008 at 10:33 PM

    Beautiful poem! =D

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  2. Nga Kaituhi o PESNovember 19, 2008 at 3:15 PM

    Robin,
    I liked the thought you put into your poem.
    Mrs Nua

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  3. AnonymousNovember 20, 2008 at 9:49 AM

    Hi Robin
    well you got a great pem and i hope to hear more of your great poems

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  4. AnonymousNovember 20, 2008 at 9:50 AM

    Hi Robin
    well you got a great pem and i hope to hear more of your great poemscrini

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  5. AnonymousNovember 30, 2008 at 10:53 AM

    Hi Robin

    Your poem reminded me of a scene at Pt England School on a cold and wet day. I could really imagine the kids waiting under shelter as it rains, and the teachers yelling out to the kids to get out of the rain and puddles. Well done.

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  6. AnonymousDecember 1, 2008 at 2:31 PM

    Hey robin nice poem there about cold and wet! It reminded me when i was in rotorua when it was cold and raining... Cool poem from shyarn

    P.S why not put this on your oh blog????

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  7. AnonymousDecember 8, 2008 at 12:48 PM

    Hey Robin
    Nice poem I really liked yuor poem.I liked the thoughts you put into your poem keep it up well done




    By Rose

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