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Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Happiness

by BEAU

Smells like roses
Looks like a nice new haircut
Tastes like chocolate mixed with marshmallows
Feels like smooth snake skin
Sounds like a seal singing
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4 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 18, 2008 at 7:13 PM

    Hi Beau
    I love your senses of happiness.... "sounds like a seal singing" is my favourite. What gave you that idea?
    Mrs Burt

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  2. Nga Kaituhi o PESNovember 19, 2008 at 3:14 PM

    Hey Beau,
    You really recreated happiness with your words! I like it.
    Keep up the good work!
    Mrs Nua

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  3. Nga Kaituhi o PESNovember 20, 2008 at 9:45 AM

    Hi Beau i really liked your poem it was really creative.

    KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.

    From Robin

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  4. AnonymousNovember 30, 2008 at 10:48 AM

    Hey Beau

    After Jordan's haircutting ceremony, the line "looks like a nice new haircut" was definately Jordan's idea of happiness. Great poem.

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