ANGRY Smells like a train on fire His rage is going to explode Fists go flying and people go crazy You could hear people going wild It tastes like burnt cookies
I love your writing Jordan. You have been very imaginative. As I read your poem I wondered how you would draw this? It could make a wonderful movie clip with your artistic talent teamed with your writing.... Mrs Burt
I love your writing Jordan. You have been very imaginative. As I read your poem I wondered how you would draw this? It could make a wonderful movie clip with your artistic talent teamed with your writing....
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Great poem Jordan. I enjoyed reading and imagining what it might look like. Why don't you draw a picture to capture your ideas? Well done.
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