In the holidays on the 27th of January, I went to skate land. It was awesome and funny, I went with my cousins. It was like watching two circus clowns when my two cousins were trying to skate, they fell over and over and over and I felt like I was watching Americas Funniest Home.Videos, the comedy show I felt like I was the host.
Next there was the races, so I went to the start line with my cousin 3...2..1. GO!!! said the man. I ZOOMED off like an angry RHINO with smoke coming out of my ears, like water in a shower LAST LAP!!! said the man. So I went as fast as I'd ever gone before. I think put flame marks in the ground I went so fast! Faster than flash,q uicksilver and super man yeah woo. Yes I won the race with my two cousins still on the ground. So I helped them up and they quit skating because of how many bruises they had.
It was time for LIMBO!!! Then my cousin came back to skate limbo. They tried it and they got out straight away. I laughed so hard, I felt like my head was going to explode like a T.N.T counting down 3...2..1. KA-BOOM went my head as I was laughing.
It was a great day.
By Sione
Next there was the races, so I went to the start line with my cousin 3...2..1. GO!!! said the man. I ZOOMED off like an angry RHINO with smoke coming out of my ears, like water in a shower LAST LAP!!! said the man. So I went as fast as I'd ever gone before. I think put flame marks in the ground I went so fast! Faster than flash,q uicksilver and super man yeah woo. Yes I won the race with my two cousins still on the ground. So I helped them up and they quit skating because of how many bruises they had.
It was time for LIMBO!!! Then my cousin came back to skate limbo. They tried it and they got out straight away. I laughed so hard, I felt like my head was going to explode like a T.N.T counting down 3...2..1. KA-BOOM went my head as I was laughing.
It was a great day.
By Sione
7 comments:
great sione did you have a great time there
It sounds like you had a great time Sione. You'd probably dissolve with laughter watching me attempt to skate too!
Keep up the great writing, I'm looking forward to your next instalment.
Mrs Nua
wow! ka-boom aye? im still laughing at the part where you came first!! you sure it was ka-boom and not ka-pow?? thats right son, not just angry rhino but more like mad dog! hahahahahaha!! awesome story son!!
mum
I like the bit when you said your cousins fell over and it was like americas funniest home video.did you laugh?
Hey Sione
your bit that dosen't make sense is when only your cousins went on limbo go and be their new guard and don't be mine. HaHa jokes.
From Mubasshira and Sylvia
cool story sione i really like the KABOOM!!! that was awsem
from Etta
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