Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Immersion Assembly


We've had another great Immersion Assembly to kick off our new Term. Our teachers all dressed up as various characters from Fairytales, as this term our topic is called 'The Art in Storytelling.' We're working on writing some great sentences that describe some of the teachers costumes.


Miss Garden's dress looked frilly and frothy, a bit like candy floss but white. When she glided on to the stage she looked like a princess. Some people said Miss Garden looked sweet and demure.

By Raven

I cracked up when I saw Miss Tito clowing around.
Her costume was an oringnal and creative idea for this term.

By Gabby.

7 comments:

Michelle said...

Where back for another term we had a very cool dress up for the teachers the whole school saw the teachers dress up. In assembly they had a little play for us.

Mrs Burt said...

Kia ora Room 17, That is a delightful lacy confection that Miss Garden is wearing isn't it! I like the words you used to describe it Raven. She did look like a princess, in fact 'to the manor born' :)
And I agree with Gabby that Miss Tito was creative. I also thought she was very courageous doing that on her first day at a new school.
Keep sharing your writing

Casey said...

What a great job you have done with your work Raven i have injoyed reading your work.


good work

Sharon said...

Hi Gabby,

You have done some cool sentences there.Did you know that?
How do you know how to write some cool sentences?
Do you think you can show me how to write some nice sentences like you're ones.

From Sharon

Casey Rm17 said...

Great work use two you really put alot of efort and time into your work.I hope somemore of your work comes on the blog.


good work

Casey Rm17 said...

Great work use two you really put alot of efort and time into your work.I hope somemore of your work comes on the blog.


good work

Sylvia and Seini-Mino said...

Hey Gabby

Your sentence was really cool and interesting I like the way you used good vocabulary. I cannot wait till next term. Keep up the good work Gabby!!!

From Sylvia and Seini-Mino