Thursday, November 20, 2008

Happiness

Smells like melted chocolate with strawberries.

It looks like babies happily playing together.

It sounds like the sound of a dolphin when it jumps up and makes a swish sound.

It tastes like the sweetness of lollies in your mouth.

It feels like you are on the bumper cars at Rain Bows End.

By Tarjindher

2 comments:

Room 9 @ Pt England School said...

What a great piece of writing using Happiness. I like your idea about babies playing together. That made me smile. Keep up the great work!

Anonymous said...

Hmmm...."melted chocolate with strawberries" is my idea of happiness! I also love the line "babies happily playing together". Well done Tarjindher.