Hi BeauI love your senses of happiness.... "sounds like a seal singing" is my favourite. What gave you that idea?Mrs Burt
Hey Beau,You really recreated happiness with your words! I like it.Keep up the good work!Mrs Nua
Hi Beau i really liked your poem it was really creative.KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.From Robin
Hey BeauAfter Jordan's haircutting ceremony, the line "looks like a nice new haircut" was definately Jordan's idea of happiness. Great poem.
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Hi Beau
I love your senses of happiness.... "sounds like a seal singing" is my favourite. What gave you that idea?
Mrs Burt
Hey Beau,
You really recreated happiness with your words! I like it.
Keep up the good work!
Mrs Nua
Hi Beau i really liked your poem it was really creative.
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
From Robin
Hey Beau
After Jordan's haircutting ceremony, the line "looks like a nice new haircut" was definately Jordan's idea of happiness. Great poem.
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