Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Happiness

by BEAU

Smells like roses

Looks like a nice new haircut
Tastes like chocolate mixed with marshmallows
Feels like smooth snake skin
Sounds like a seal singing

4 comments:

Manaiakalani said...

Hi Beau
I love your senses of happiness.... "sounds like a seal singing" is my favourite. What gave you that idea?
Mrs Burt

Nga Kaituhi o PES said...

Hey Beau,
You really recreated happiness with your words! I like it.
Keep up the good work!
Mrs Nua

Nga Kaituhi o PES said...

Hi Beau i really liked your poem it was really creative.

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.

From Robin

Mrs Lagitupu said...

Hey Beau

After Jordan's haircutting ceremony, the line "looks like a nice new haircut" was definately Jordan's idea of happiness. Great poem.