Monday, November 10, 2008

Cold and Wet

Sitting at the window looking out at that cold weather.
Little rain drops hitting the ground really fast.

It feels really cold out there.
People running everywhere.

Little kids in cosy jackets waiting under shelter.
Puddles everywhere kids jumping up and down in
huge puddles.

By Robin

7 comments:

Maria Karla said...

Beautiful poem! =D

Nga Kaituhi o PES said...

Robin,
I liked the thought you put into your poem.
Mrs Nua

leander said...

Hi Robin
well you got a great pem and i hope to hear more of your great poems

leander said...

Hi Robin
well you got a great pem and i hope to hear more of your great poemscrini

Mrs Lagitupu said...

Hi Robin

Your poem reminded me of a scene at Pt England School on a cold and wet day. I could really imagine the kids waiting under shelter as it rains, and the teachers yelling out to the kids to get out of the rain and puddles. Well done.

Shyarn Rm17 said...

Hey robin nice poem there about cold and wet! It reminded me when i was in rotorua when it was cold and raining... Cool poem from shyarn

P.S why not put this on your oh blog????

Rose said...

Hey Robin
Nice poem I really liked yuor poem.I liked the thoughts you put into your poem keep it up well done




By Rose