Wednesday, November 5, 2008

A Poem done By Jordan Called ANGRY

ANGRY
Smells like a train on fire
His rage is going to explode
Fists go flying and people go crazy
You could hear people going wild
It tastes like burnt cookies

2 comments:

Manaiakalani said...

I love your writing Jordan. You have been very imaginative. As I read your poem I wondered how you would draw this? It could make a wonderful movie clip with your artistic talent teamed with your writing....
Mrs Burt

Kingston said...

Great poem Jordan. I enjoyed reading and imagining what it might look like. Why don't you draw a picture to capture your ideas? Well done.

Little brother