By Charm
Friday, September 25, 2009
Agent Red
One beautiful morning Agent Red went strolling through the forest to her grandma's. Then she heard something creeping in the bushes. She told herself to keep alert. There was the rabbit, looming up behind her shrouding her in darkness. She didn't notice until she saw the shadow come up from behind. She took one big kick to the face of the rabbit and dashed away...
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Hi,
I like the descriptive vocabulary that you used...words like shrouding, dashed, looming. This made your story very exciting to read!
Hi there Charm,great orintation it really hooked me in to reading this piece of writing.I like the way you used intersting words like shrouding,dashed,looming.Well I can't wait to hear all the part of the story.
Hi there Charm,great orintation it really hooked me in to reading this piece of writing.I like the way you used intersting words like shrouding,dashed,looming.Well I can't wait to hear all the part of the story.
that was sad story about samoa that got hit by the Tsunami and i was sad because my uncle passedaway by the Tsunami so we had a funeral
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