Sitting at the window looking out at that cold weather.
Little rain drops hitting the ground really fast.
It feels really cold out there.
People running everywhere.
Little kids in cosy jackets waiting under shelter.
Puddles everywhere kids jumping up and down in
huge puddles.
By Robin
7 comments:
Beautiful poem! =D
Robin,
I liked the thought you put into your poem.
Mrs Nua
Hi Robin
well you got a great pem and i hope to hear more of your great poems
Hi Robin
well you got a great pem and i hope to hear more of your great poemscrini
Hi Robin
Your poem reminded me of a scene at Pt England School on a cold and wet day. I could really imagine the kids waiting under shelter as it rains, and the teachers yelling out to the kids to get out of the rain and puddles. Well done.
Hey robin nice poem there about cold and wet! It reminded me when i was in rotorua when it was cold and raining... Cool poem from shyarn
P.S why not put this on your oh blog????
Hey Robin
Nice poem I really liked yuor poem.I liked the thoughts you put into your poem keep it up well done
By Rose
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